Show versus Tell

Today I have found that in some places I tell more than show the reader what is happening. Luckily I know  where the story is going and how the story ends. I am so wrapped up in the story that because it is composed from a first person POV, I am already in that role and I can feel, taste, smell and hear what my protagonist Josephine would experience. Thereby changing the telling to showing.

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