Tip 2 – 11 Smart Tips for Brilliant Writing

Be specific

Consider two sentences:

  • I grow lots of flowers in my back yard.
  • I grow 34 varieties of flowers in my back yard, including pink cone flowers, purple asters, yellow daylilies, Shasta daisies, and climbing clematis.

Which is more interesting? Which helps you see my back yard?

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